Announcement ~ LUNAR announced - feedback wanted
LUNAR Walking School
# Posted on Aug. 3, 2008, 3:42 p.m. by Gideon Zhi

So here it is, ready to be playtested... or is it? The script is still slightly wooden, in a translated-from-Japanese sort of way. It's hard to pinpoint what's wrong with it, and maybe it's only something that a trained eye can see, but it's certainly not on par with recent stuff like LaL 2.0. Passable, maybe? I'm not sure.

So, I'm asking for opinions. Would you all rather see another edit pass, or should I just toss it into betatesting? It's certainly otherwise ready.
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Dezaemon SFC
PlatformSNES
GenreShooter (Creation Kit)
PublisherAthena
Published OnSept. 20, 1994
Initial ReleaseJune 18, 2000
Latest ReleaseJune 18, 2000
Current Version1.00